A Most Unsuitable Man
January 8th 2008 13:07
You may think that I’m just some regular Joe on the internet… posting some comments, making a few jokes, and maybe getting across some opinions through amazingly elegant prose. But you see, there’s a little bit more to me than that. I didn’t just one day decide to start a blog about books. You see, I know books.
I don’t really want to say how or why, but trust me on this. And because I know books, I also know authors. The authors I know are on the way up; I wouldn’t deal with the ones on the way down. Sometimes they ask me for their opinions. Usually I don’t have time to humour them… but sometimes… there is something which stands out. A diamond amongst the rough, if you will.
Margaret Atwood is a diamond. She is a 19 year-old romance novelist from right here in Brisbane. And she has something which everybody is after: talent. Kindly, she has agreed to let me post some of her work on this blog after I gave her my thoughts. Obviously, I helped her a great deal. Young Margaret has a lot to learn, and in some ways, this extract is a bit rough around the edges; but I assure you, there is talent there and you must be blind if you can’t see it.
What follows is extracts from two chapters of Margaret’s soon-to-be-released debut novel A Most Unsuitable Man. Potential publishers take note.
The rest of you: sit back and enjoy.
***
I’ll have to leave it there, but a shiver just ran down my spine. Powerful stuff.
I don’t really want to say how or why, but trust me on this. And because I know books, I also know authors. The authors I know are on the way up; I wouldn’t deal with the ones on the way down. Sometimes they ask me for their opinions. Usually I don’t have time to humour them… but sometimes… there is something which stands out. A diamond amongst the rough, if you will.
Margaret Atwood is a diamond. She is a 19 year-old romance novelist from right here in Brisbane. And she has something which everybody is after: talent. Kindly, she has agreed to let me post some of her work on this blog after I gave her my thoughts. Obviously, I helped her a great deal. Young Margaret has a lot to learn, and in some ways, this extract is a bit rough around the edges; but I assure you, there is talent there and you must be blind if you can’t see it.
What follows is extracts from two chapters of Margaret’s soon-to-be-released debut novel A Most Unsuitable Man. Potential publishers take note.
The rest of you: sit back and enjoy.
The gentle song of the bird woke her as it drifted on the breeze through her bedroom window. She stretched and yawned as she opened her eyes. It was a beautiful day. Through the window she could make out the clear blue sky with a hint of fluffy white clouds. The lofty branches of a nearby tree gently swayed in the light breeze. She could make out the faint sounds of children laughing. It was perfect. At least, everything should have been perfect.
It almost felt like the presence of someone in the room beside her, but she knew that she was alone. She glanced over her left shoulder at her bedside table where the picture frame rested, facing towards her. Mocking her. Reminding her of what she was missing. Reminding her of better times, which cruelly, were over. It has been six months now. Six months that would rather forget. Six months that she desperately wanted to leave behind. Six months of tears, sleepy nights and a daily struggle to get out of bed. Six months of struggling to let go, but failing, grasping at the past, and clinging to her memories.
She sat up abruptly. Today is the day, she thought. Today is the day that I take my life back and leave him behind. She reached over and picked up the picture frame. Her eyes met his for the last time. With the force of six months’ of pent up frustration, she threw the frame across the room, where it smashed against the wall… shattering… her old life… in broken pieces on the floor.
It almost felt like the presence of someone in the room beside her, but she knew that she was alone. She glanced over her left shoulder at her bedside table where the picture frame rested, facing towards her. Mocking her. Reminding her of what she was missing. Reminding her of better times, which cruelly, were over. It has been six months now. Six months that would rather forget. Six months that she desperately wanted to leave behind. Six months of tears, sleepy nights and a daily struggle to get out of bed. Six months of struggling to let go, but failing, grasping at the past, and clinging to her memories.
She sat up abruptly. Today is the day, she thought. Today is the day that I take my life back and leave him behind. She reached over and picked up the picture frame. Her eyes met his for the last time. With the force of six months’ of pent up frustration, she threw the frame across the room, where it smashed against the wall… shattering… her old life… in broken pieces on the floor.
***
“Excuse me.”
She didn’t respond. She simply stood and stared.
“Um, excuse me. Are you alright?”
She snapped back to reality. “Oh, of course, sorry… I was thinking about work!” If only he knew that she worked in a florist, she thought, what a silly lie to tell!
She laughed nervously and could her face blushing from embarrassment. How could she be so stupid. She didn’t mean to stare… but he was something else. He was not the usual kind of man she saw in the supermarket. So tall with broad shoulders. The hint of a dark beard on his tanned face. That smile. With a further sudden rush of embarrassment she realised she was doing it again. He was still watching her with an amused grin on his face.
Pulling her trolley towards her, she made room for him to slip past her in the aisle. She stared intently at the plastic-wrapped cheese in her hand and hoped that this horrible moment would pass. She felt like an awkward teenager, standing against the wall of her first school dance, hoping that someone would notice her and hoping equally, that no one would notice her.
“Thank you.” His voice was impossibly deep. She waited for him to pass, but for some reason he did not move. Time had slowed down to a crawl for her; she just wanted this moment to end. And now I‘m looking even more foolish by staring at this stupid cheese for so long, she thought! She sheepishly looked up at him, and he smiled again.
“Sorry, to bother you, I wouldn’t normally say something like this, but I just couldn’t let this opportunity go. I wouldn’t be able to live with myself.”
He took a deep breath. She had stopped breathing entirely as she hung on his every word…
She didn’t respond. She simply stood and stared.
“Um, excuse me. Are you alright?”
She snapped back to reality. “Oh, of course, sorry… I was thinking about work!” If only he knew that she worked in a florist, she thought, what a silly lie to tell!
She laughed nervously and could her face blushing from embarrassment. How could she be so stupid. She didn’t mean to stare… but he was something else. He was not the usual kind of man she saw in the supermarket. So tall with broad shoulders. The hint of a dark beard on his tanned face. That smile. With a further sudden rush of embarrassment she realised she was doing it again. He was still watching her with an amused grin on his face.
Pulling her trolley towards her, she made room for him to slip past her in the aisle. She stared intently at the plastic-wrapped cheese in her hand and hoped that this horrible moment would pass. She felt like an awkward teenager, standing against the wall of her first school dance, hoping that someone would notice her and hoping equally, that no one would notice her.
“Thank you.” His voice was impossibly deep. She waited for him to pass, but for some reason he did not move. Time had slowed down to a crawl for her; she just wanted this moment to end. And now I‘m looking even more foolish by staring at this stupid cheese for so long, she thought! She sheepishly looked up at him, and he smiled again.
“Sorry, to bother you, I wouldn’t normally say something like this, but I just couldn’t let this opportunity go. I wouldn’t be able to live with myself.”
He took a deep breath. She had stopped breathing entirely as she hung on his every word…
I’ll have to leave it there, but a shiver just ran down my spine. Powerful stuff.
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